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gameofwandsmod (gameofwandsmod) wrote,

Hi Jen! So sorry it's taken me so long to read this - I have a minor note to bring up before I do adds (which won't be until tomorrow, don't worry!):

- Three (possibly four) of his negative personality traits are very, very similar: secretive, detached, and hidden. Dark and cruel are also riffs on the same general things, and I'd like to see five individual traits rather than a different take on the same one multiple times. :)

- Also, it seems somewhat unlikely that any eighteen-year-old would be offered a job as professor - even Snape had to wait until he was twenty-one. :) Perhaps substitute another position here?

- Lastly, his secret - that he's an Unspeakable - isn't really a secret, as Ministry members would know. It's just what he actually does with his day that's secret, and that's not quite the kind of information I'm looking for with that question. While the pureblood thing is good, unless he goes out of his way to make it seem like he's friendly to Muggles and Muggleborns, which it doesn't seem like he does at all, then that's probably assumed. Is there something else here - something that possibly ties into the 'dark', 'secretive' side of him and gives me a better idea of what that's all about?

Thanks so much, Jen! Looking forward to having him in the game. :D