flashfly ([info]flashfly) wrote on December 30th, 2007 at 07:14 am
I just re-read this and want you to know that it's good - the rhythm especially. Do you read your stuff out loud after you write? I do and I find that this helps me edit and revise. Maybe drabbles are a good place to concentrate - there is such a finite playing field and you can really make the most of it.
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