23 November 2007 @ 01:54 pm
Your Lover, the Artist.  
Drabble. Post 513. That is all.

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You used to get turned on by tall, muscled bodies, by overpowering men as big as yourself, bigger even.

Then it was blue eyes, bright smiles, running your fingers through blond silk.

Now, now it's the smell of turpentine, it's flecks of blue and grey under fingernails.

It's the sighs he makes when you massage his shoulders, his hand, working out the ache after long hours of painting.

It's coming inside his ass, letting it drip back down over your balls, your cock, still inside him. Always still inside him.

It's his laugh at the squelching sounds.

It's your lover.
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notreallyme10[info]notreallyme10 on November 23rd, 2007 03:11 am (UTC)
Holy shit. This is REALLY good. Seriously beautiful and just a little dirty. Perfect.
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Britin: 513 entwined by silent_seas[info]_alicesprings on November 23rd, 2007 03:39 am (UTC)
Aww, thank you muchly, my sweet.
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secretsolitaire: bj 311 floor sex[info]secretsolitaire on November 23rd, 2007 03:28 am (UTC)
Mmmmmm. Gorgeous.
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Britin: 513 j hands on b sex by silent_seas[info]_alicesprings on November 23rd, 2007 03:40 am (UTC)
Thank you very much!
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brianslave68: bj bedroom[info]brianslave68 on November 23rd, 2007 03:51 am (UTC)
That was absolutely beautiful!
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Britin: 513 tux brush by ate_a_bug[info]_alicesprings on November 23rd, 2007 04:04 am (UTC)
Thank you very much!
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singlewoman: B/J kiss by paddies[info]singlewoman on November 23rd, 2007 03:55 am (UTC)
Oh so lovely.
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Britin: 513 in sync by silent_seas[info]_alicesprings on November 23rd, 2007 04:03 am (UTC)
Thank you very much!
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my2cats: 513 once in a lifetime[info]my2cats on November 23rd, 2007 04:05 am (UTC)
That was perfect!

Oh,teh Love...

I loved it.
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Britin: 314 love by paddies[info]_alicesprings on November 23rd, 2007 04:09 am (UTC)
Thank you kindly!
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testdog65: B/J S5 t-shirt couch [info]testdog65 on November 23rd, 2007 04:20 am (UTC)
Beautifully done!

~Ellen

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Britin: 513 end kiss hair touch by paddies[info]_alicesprings on November 23rd, 2007 04:22 am (UTC)
Thank you my darling!

Marathon stuff coming tonight (my time)!
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pendulumchanges: 513 - 'loved' Brian touches Justin[info]pendulumchanges on November 23rd, 2007 04:52 am (UTC)
oh my godddddd :) *melts* This is so sweet!

It's his laugh at the squelching sounds.

That right there is just a perfect little bit of post-513 Brian and Justin. Of course Justin would laugh at the sound and of course Brian would love him even more because he laughed.
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Britin: 512 hug by raelala[info]_alicesprings on November 23rd, 2007 06:07 am (UTC)
Well thank you for the lovely comment!
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court1429[info]court1429 on November 23rd, 2007 06:39 am (UTC)
Drabble. Post 513. That is all.

And that is plenty. *nods* I liked this, _as! ;)
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Britin: infinite by raelala[info]_alicesprings on November 23rd, 2007 08:52 am (UTC)
Thanks very much Court!
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[info]mona_may56 on November 23rd, 2007 02:12 pm (UTC)
See icon, Justin is sooo loved ^^
Very nice drabble
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Britin: loved by paddies[info]_alicesprings on November 23rd, 2007 11:18 pm (UTC)
He is indeed. Thanks very much!
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happier_bunny: b/j always you shower[info]happier_bunny on November 23rd, 2007 02:35 pm (UTC)
very very nice!
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Britin: 513 entwined by silent_seas[info]_alicesprings on November 23rd, 2007 11:18 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much!
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[info]herefordroad on November 23rd, 2007 04:55 pm (UTC)
very nice indeed! i'm amused by brian's trading expensive bath products for the smell of turpentine!

jeannie
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Britin: 311 chest kiss by evilsource[info]_alicesprings on November 23rd, 2007 11:17 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much!
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[info]plasticine_star on November 23rd, 2007 10:39 pm (UTC)
This was really good.

It's your lover. *sigh* oh Brian you love him so much.
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Britin: kinney hearts taylor by ate_a_bug[info]_alicesprings on November 23rd, 2007 11:16 pm (UTC)
He does.

Thanks very much!
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[info]taffystuck on November 24th, 2007 01:28 pm (UTC)
It´s his laugh at the squelching sounds.It´s your lover.
*DIES* you hear *Dies*
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Britin: 502 post coital by nanoa[info]_alicesprings on November 24th, 2007 11:36 pm (UTC)
Lol, thank you! Glad you liked it!
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flashfly: justin1[info]flashfly on December 30th, 2007 07:14 am (UTC)
I just re-read this and want you to know that it's good - the rhythm especially. Do you read your stuff out loud after you write? I do and I find that this helps me edit and revise. Maybe drabbles are a good place to concentrate - there is such a finite playing field and you can really make the most of it.
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Britin: 401 cheek kiss by summerinabaddon[info]_alicesprings on December 30th, 2007 07:28 am (UTC)
Thank you! No, I don't read it out loud, perhaps I should give that a go.

I do enjoy the drabbles, but I find it impossible to sit and write them on demand. I only get ideas for them occasionally, and when I do, they pretty much appear fully formed in my head!
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flashfly[info]flashfly on December 30th, 2007 07:34 am (UTC)
I pretend I'm reading to an audience so that I read with all the proper inflections and pauses. As I work my way through the fic, I realize that certain speech patterns don't work, or a sentence may need another word to give it more oomph.

This may not work for you, but I depend on it. Try it!
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Britin: s2 chinese food by youbetterwiseup[info]_alicesprings on December 30th, 2007 07:38 am (UTC)
That's a good tip. I will try it, thank you!
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