testdog65 ([info]testdog65) wrote on April 13th, 2008 at 11:17 pm
These are really wonderful. I love how you show in both of these that Justin focuses Brian's pleasure, making it something more definitive and deeper. In the first, pleasure suddenly has a face and a name. And in the second, through Justin, it's become so much more. Beautifully written, my dear.

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