12 April 2008 @ 12:54 pm
Two Drabbles.  


Brian is a hedonist. He craves pleasure above all else. He's spent years seeking it out.

Asses are there for him to use, mouths there to be fucked.

Until he meets Justin, and then Brian discovers a whole new world of pleasure.

The pleasure in watching innocent eyes widen at the initial pain of entry, then squeeze closed as bliss takes over.

Washing Justin's back, just an excuse to touch his silky skin.

Having his mouth filled with Justin's thick cock. Burying his tongue in Justin's ass..

Seeing his toes curl, making him come.

Worshiping Justin is Brian's greatest pleasure.

* * *

Brian lies awake, head propped up, watching the streetlight play over the pale skin of Justin's back. He runs a fingertip lightly across Justin's shoulders. The skin smoother than anything he's ever touched. He listens to Justin's quiet sighs - he's content.

He buries his nose in the back of Justin's neck, breathing in the smell as familiar to him as his own. The smell he craves, the smell he misses.

He watches Justin sleep, and feels a pang in his chest. Knowing that tomorrow he'll board a plane and return home alone. He watches Justin sleep and he makes plans.


ETA: Hmm, you know what, I think the second drabble may have been subconsciously influenced by the end of Jude's wonderful fic, Geography for Beginners, so credit where it's due. You should all go read her fic, tis far superior.
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secretsolitaire: blissed out brian[info]secretsolitaire on April 12th, 2008 04:11 am (UTC)
Enjoyed both of these, especially the first. I think it's a very accurate portrait of Brian.
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Britin[info]_alicesprings on April 12th, 2008 08:14 am (UTC)
Thank you SO much! I'm so pleased you liked them :)
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[info]noteverything on April 12th, 2008 04:28 am (UTC)
Yum. These are both really great.

And while I agree that [info]flashfly's Geography for Beginners is wonderful like *woah*...I think you write wonderfully too. I really mean that.</i>
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Britin[info]_alicesprings on April 12th, 2008 08:14 am (UTC)
My sweet, darling Tweedy. What would I do without you?

Thank you!! I'm very happy you liked them!

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[info]noteverything on April 17th, 2008 04:00 am (UTC)
You'd do *just* fine without me, but I am totally happy to cheer you along. It makes me happy. :D
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singlewoman: eyesforyou by furriboots[info]singlewoman on April 12th, 2008 02:32 pm (UTC)
Loved these. The first is such an accurate protrait of Brian and the second is full of hope.

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Britin[info]_alicesprings on April 13th, 2008 02:12 am (UTC)
Thank you so very much!
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notreallyme10: Justin green[info]notreallyme10 on April 12th, 2008 03:15 pm (UTC)
God, these are beautiful. The first one is so dead on and the second one is such a sad and yet hopeful view of post 513.
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Britin[info]_alicesprings on April 13th, 2008 02:13 am (UTC)
Aww, thank you so much, my sweet!
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[info]besamislabios on April 12th, 2008 04:44 pm (UTC)
These drabble are great, the first one is just perfect and the second is beautiful, all about Brian's senses and you can feel the hope at the end. I loved them.
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Britin[info]_alicesprings on April 13th, 2008 02:13 am (UTC)
Eee, thank you very much! I'm so happy!
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testdog65: B/J 513 on bed[info]testdog65 on April 13th, 2008 11:17 pm (UTC)
These are really wonderful. I love how you show in both of these that Justin focuses Brian's pleasure, making it something more definitive and deeper. In the first, pleasure suddenly has a face and a name. And in the second, through Justin, it's become so much more. Beautifully written, my dear.

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Britin[info]_alicesprings on April 14th, 2008 01:01 am (UTC)
Thanks Ellen, your feedback means the world to me. I'm so pleased you liked them!
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